This story was quite well written, you have been able to effectively convey the feelings of the character to the reader. However, I believe that the story was too vague and did not go into as much detail as I would have liked. This story has potential to be a very interesting novel if you decide to expand on the story.

Well done!

Ah... Shinji waitin ryousuke to wake up. It's so hard to just wait like that when you love the person infront of you. This was really great, shonjis emotions nearly made me cry. Thank you.

Thank you so much for writing Orthros no Inu fanfiction. I've been hunting for it for ages. I wish that they'd focused more on Shinji's relationship with Ryosuke, rather than keeping it a secret until the end. (I'm a bit of a sucker for brotherly love though) :) This is really good!