I really like the insight into his mind...

That was beautiful, and very well-written.

nice little vignette. you really captured a bit o teh spirit of batman there.

Wow... very good... Wow... hopefully you have more fics... Cuz i gonna read them... wow this was... wow.

Very well done

That was SO Batman! So true to him that is. Ok I'm Rambling. Let's just say good job!

Not enough great reviews for this. I thought it was fantastic. I really liked it. It was nice, dark, angsty, and deep. It was very very good. I loved the comparison too. Good job

Pretty good.

Alright...first off...your summary needs to be changed. Batman and Bruce Wayne are the same person so they, he are in control all the gawd dang time and that's a given. Secondly, Bruce Wayne is insane. He's a fuggin' wacko. At such a young age, not only did he lose his parents but he became a billioniare the second their pulse rates dropped to negatives. That's gotta screw you up. Secondly, dressed as Batman he goes out night after night striving to rid Gotham City of all wrongs. He never wants what happened to him to happen to anyone else. And that is an impossible battle. He can't win. Not ever. And he knows it. That, alone is enough to frag a person up big time. Hey, e-mail me if you want to debate this anymore...

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