me gusto mucho tu historia aunque estuvo en ingles, el cual no es mi idioma favorito, aun así capturaste el espíritu de una época he hiciste creíble la realidad de 2 enamorados del pasado. En tu historia veo indicios de algunos elementos irónicos y de otro tipo, me gusto mucho y siento que es una historia tierna que capta el dolor de volver a ver lo que es imposible de alcanzar.

Me gusta mucho esta historia y espero que sigas escribiendo por mucho tiempo tu percepción de los sentimientos es simplemente maestre

No, I quite enjoyed how they didn't kiss. I admit when I first read the description I was afraid of exactly that, so I read the entire fic with wide, scared eyes.

Thank you for staying true to the century,

Anyway, I thought your fic was written very well, and I quite enjoyed it.

I almost feel as if you could change the character names and a few things to make it stand as an original story, that's how great your character development was.

I really hope to see more from you, you're a good writer, keep it up!

Woaah very good... And sad... But lovely

It was written really well, but I think you were describing too much about how they felt; like Jane understanding, etc. You described already with their actions and dialogue. Also, I would try to keep the Author's Notes at the beginning, as it's distracting to the reader; and many of us do know what you tried to say in the Author's Notes. Great first story though; keep up the good work!

This was great for your first story ] I really enjoyed it and it was infact what I would have pictures after the end of the movie...It's the opposite of what I...We probably all wanted which was that they'd kiss and 'get together' lol but yes obviously maturity comes in and yeah Jane does die *sigh* anyway it was great!

Ah, no! Screw reality and let us go with fiction! :/ This was great though. I loved it. (:

i think you did very well with this ! thank you and I think you should write more !

see you soon I hope !

pingou

Very cute! I loved the movie and the ending made me so sad. I wanted Jane and Tom to end up together so badly! Then I was forced to watch Pride and Prejudice to make myself feel happy again.

I didn't notice any errors in spelling, grammer, or punctuation, so congrats on the too.

Anyway, very cute!