Please tell me you are updating this...

thats it write more what did he ask?

Hey, good story. Are you going to continue it?

When I saw your name, edwardbabymomma , I was hoping you would have a story with a baby, and you DID! YAY! I love stories where B & E have a baby!

Please write more!

hey

thanks! :)

really like it..

best of luck with the contest! :)

So no you are no longer an author virgin. I am so proud of you. Contests are always a good way to break into writing.

I like the writing voice you used in the story. Bella was telling the story but also kind of talking to the audience. That was a very neat device. Your Edward and Bella were also very sweet and loving to one another and the song choice, "I'll Always Love You" is absolutely perfect for the two of them, because if you're an E/B shipper like me, that is exactly the case.

The lemons were especially tart, and the wedding in Vegas was fabulous. I hope you will continue to write more and more and eventually be confident enough to pimp your stories out on Twitter, because you read all these writers' stuff, and they should be returning the favor.

I like how she began by asking him a question and ended it by asking him another question. That was great.

Keep writing, Nic.

Bev

cute story :)

GREAT JOB ON THIS. LOVED THE BELLA AND EDWARD.

I enjoyed it very much. It was sweet and romantic... with some hot lovin' thrown in. Very good job my dear!

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