|Reviews for project: SIREN|
| michael 5/17/10 . chapter 21
If I had to choose, I think this would be my favorite entry. I love the description of the vision and really giving Hanuda a sense of mysticality and ethereality. I love this.
| michael 5/17/10 . chapter 7
Interesting shift in grammar and syntax. In general. Each journal entry really shows a distinct person (when it means to be). I really feel like I'm looking through different eyes each time the point of view changes.
| michael 5/17/10 . chapter 5
I like the very end of this. When Natalia questions to whom she is to pray or from whom this is a punishment, it speaks volumes to the faults and discrepancies of religion. Very well done. )
| TStabler 1/15/10 . chapter 3
) suspense and drama and I can feel wverything you have put your characters through: the turmoil, the aguish. Keep going!