If I had to choose, I think this would be my favorite entry. I love the description of the vision and really giving Hanuda a sense of mysticality and ethereality. I love this.

Interesting shift in grammar and syntax. In general. Each journal entry really shows a distinct person (when it means to be). I really feel like I'm looking through different eyes each time the point of view changes.

I like the very end of this. When Natalia questions to whom she is to pray or from whom this is a punishment, it speaks volumes to the faults and discrepancies of religion. Very well done. )

) suspense and drama and I can feel wverything you have put your characters through: the turmoil, the aguish. Keep going!