This is very well written I really hope you update soon. C:

A beautiful fragment, beginning to come whole. Luna and Severus are very good here together. Thank you.

Oh, yes-Luna's extremely skewed logic, combined with her obvious expertise at Potions, would make for a very interesting student. Snape will have to work hard to keep up with her-he's not used to a student who is both unafraid and likes Potions.

i really liked both chapters! i hope you keep updating!

Cheers

AJ

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri

Even though it's such an odd pairing, you make it so believable and enjoyable! Very well done!

Very Luna.

One of my first thoughts is that a bit more build up between the first and the second chapters would have been nice, but I suppose this is a fragment challenge, and Luna bluntly stating her feelings is certainly very in character for her. Looking forward to more chapters.

Wow, I really enjoyed this. I like that you've chosen to start it early one, rather than assuming a relationship- despite it being the more difficult thing to do you pulled it off very well!

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri

This is really well written! Both Snape's thoughts (especially deciding to pick on the oddball), and the way you portray Luna seem very in character.