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pokemon master428 2008-05-27 ch 4, anon.	abusewow ,THE BEST STORY EVER WRITEN!
Shuutastic 2008-04-25 ch 4,	abuseI just love it when TR helps. That was a nice read; interesting plot and I'm glad you didn't forget any early story details. Nice job. :)
Some Enchanted Evening 2007-12-27 ch 4,	abuseI know it might be a bit silly, reviewing a fic from 2002, but reading your review made me want to check out your fanfiction, since usually people who leave thoughtful and detailed reviews (rather than the standard "i lyked this moar plz") are the ones who also write thoughtful and detailed stories. And I found that I was right! The story took a direction I didn't expect with Misty's accident! But it was a great twist, and I really enjoyed the characterization of Ash and Brock in relation to it. Despite how wonderful they might be, they're still teenage boys who are going to be jerks from time to time, as evidenced by their teasing of Misty. However, they can always be counted on in a time of crisis, and it is just like Ash to feel guilty for having, in his mind, caused the accident in the first place. Likewise, I thought it was in character for Misty's anger to disappear, as she seems to be a character who will overreact to small things while keeping a calm head in a serious situation. I loved that Team Rocket was able to help them, because they really aren't completely evil, especially later on in the series. However, I loved even more that this didn't make them all "bffs!" and instead it was understood that things would be back to 'normal' after this incident. And I loved that Jessie didn't even know Misty's name. She just knows her as 'the girl' or 'the twerpette' or 'the twerp's friend'. It was a nice connective moment that still kept Jessie and Team Rocket in general in character. Your fic had two of the things that made me enjoy an Ash/Misty story the most: First, a realistic portrayal of how a relationship might surface between them. Honestly, I don't think Ash OR Misty are really the declare-my-love-from-the-rooftop type, and I really liked the simple, tender motions between them in your fic that COULD still be friendship, but also hint at deeper lying feelings. They're testing the waters instead of diving straight in. And I adored the little!Ash stories. I easily see him as being a klutz and having more injuries than Misty and Brock (and probably all of Brock's siblings) combined. Secondly, you remembered Brock! Yay, Brock! Sadly, so many people push Brock aside completely, or worse, make him OC in order to vilify him, in order to make way for the Ash/Misty pairing, and it's just not needed. The Ash-Misty-Brock dynamic is one of my favorite things about the show, and it's sad when it's completely forgotten. (Other groupings, like Ash-Misty-Tracey, don't bother me when they're broken up, because I always thought that just by definition of when he came into their lives, Tracey was always a bit of a third wheel to Ash and Misty. However, Brock was always a firm part of the unit, of the group.) While Ash and Misty may be gravitating towards each other in a more romantic sense now, neither of them has forgotten about Brock and how important his friendship is to them, as well as his presence in their group dynamic. They're still all a family. So, as I wrap up this really long review, it was a really excellent story that I really enjoyed! It had all the factors that I want in a good Ash/Misty, where Ash is very much ASH, and Misty is very much MISTY. Your characters were excellently written, and extremely in character, and you painted a really vivid picture for your audience. Great job! As a final note, isn't Togepi a pain in the to write? I always found it cute in the show but now I find it just a general pain in the just for the fact that I always have to remember to INCLUDE it, even though it's never doing anything interesting.
HiddenSecrets831 2007-11-28 ch 4,	abuse^^ oh how cute!
HiddenSecrets831 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuseOh poor Misty. Exelent chapter. Nothing more than what i would expect from you. Ash really needs to grow up lol.
Blue Rose177 2007-11-19 ch 2,	abusei saw rose red, one heck of a night. i think i sat in the chair for about 20 min after it ended just staring at the screen. lol. me likes the story!!
catseyebow 2007-11-13 ch 3,	abuseBLOODY HELL I HATE CLIFFY"S! especially when the story is so good i dont realize im at the end of the chapter ur a good writer and i hope u update soon
Super Reader 2007-09-10 ch 4,	abuseWow!! That was great! I loved it!! Though I was kinda afriad Misty would die at one point. Jeez Ash and Brock were mean to play that joke on her. Though in a way it was good because it brought Ash and Misty closer. Great fic! :)
^_^ 2007-07-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseOhs.. ^^ I loved it! No OOCness, lots of fluff, and.. coolfulness _ Good job!
crimson-obsidian-rose 2007-06-05 ch 4,	abuseThis is one seriously awesome fiction you've wrtten!! It's so good, that I was reading it in school, got halfway though when the bell rang, then scorffed my lunch so I could finish it in the library. Seriously, you're a very good author!
xheartkreuzx 2007-04-18 ch 4,	abuseaww. i loveed it!!
xheartkreuzx 2007-04-18 ch 2,	abuseowwie. poor mist
xheartkreuzx 2007-04-18 ch 1,	abusegreat start! poor misty =[
Fia 2006-10-19 ch 4, anon.	abuseNice. I plan to read it repetivly. But right now it's 11:41 and I'm going to bed. And a word of advice. Try a story very similar in which Ash is in trouble, not Misty. My favorite kind of story. ^__^
Fivercon 2006-09-12 ch 4,	abuseAw, that was so precious! Your descriptions throughout the entire story were so well written that I felt like I was there running through the cemetary with Misty all the way to sitting in the tent enjoying some adorable Ash and Misty goodness. Although there wasn't as much romance in this fic, I absolutely love and agree with your depictions of the two. After all, they are only kids :) It's so great to read some moments between these two lovebirds after all these years! Loved it.

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