I don't know if I reviewed the NC-17 version of this (I read it yesterday) but they're both incredibly ironic. His torturer is by far the biggest weakness he has. Even more so that she knows his weaknesses and has the mind to use them against him. Well if not the other, that's another way to bring a grown man to his knees. Well written. Both completely hilarious despite the seriousness of Zack's predicament. ;P

FUNNY! i really didn't expect that!

This totally AU piece of masterwork is highly entertaining! Especially so, because you don't know how she tortures him till near the end.

Oh, yes, I wanted to add something, because I read the reviews for this story and stumbled on the one of 'What?': Please, never care what people tell you about your story if they aren't even brave enough to leave their names or e-mail adresses. Most of these cowards can't even write a good birthday card and just leave reviews to feel good and almighty!

Haha ! Poor Zack the big bad soldier is ticklish!

kinda out of whack unrealistic totally

That was really funny. I really enjoyed it. _