Nice version of the story.

good story

I really liked your version of Pinochio! It's nice to see Pinnochio with friends and more people in his family. Great job! ]

oh i'm so happy you wrote this! i love love love the happy ending and also that 2 other donkey boys were saved! thank you so much for saving pinocchio and his friend! :D

a good story with a great ending

Awwwww! I'm so glad that Pinocchio is now a real boy even though I was surprised that there's gonna be a epilogue. I'm looking forward for next chapter!

what a miricle. pinocchio becomes a real boy and lampwick is adopted too.

beatiful chapter, i think i know what will happen nexts.

Ooh! Does this mean that Pinnochio will become a human in the next chapter? Also, I think that the Blue fairy is truly like a mother to him.

Wow! Great chapter! Pinocchio is now a great student! -

wonderful chapter., i love all the refences to the orignal pinocchio book in this part.

father sold his coat.

pinocchio getting a job drawing buckets of water

making basket of reeds

being the first to arrive and last to leave

and using the money with intend to buy something for oneself only to give to someone more needy.

love this chapter, I see you put in a refence to the live-action pinocchio movie and geppettos wife story too.

I'm so happy for the gang! They are home at last! -

A good chapter, waiting to see what happens to Lampwick.

In my own story I'm leaving the James Bond universe for one based on another of my favorites, the TV Western Gunsmoke.

Great chapter! If I remember correctly, in the Disney film...Pinnochio was either dead or unconscious after helping his family escape from Monstro's anger.