Awesome, there were some very interesting things happening, I really liked it!

I don't think I'd thought about the option of Bella feeling something more about Edward, and I'm glad it's all good! Great chapter.

Well, if a review is everything that takes to make Aunt Clara angry, here it is LOL awesome chapter, I really liked it, I'm looking forward to that talk with Anna!

Nice chapter, and I think you did a pretty good job with this chapter!

Oh, I loved this chapter, Edward's so naive, love him!

I'm really shocked that this story hasn't got more reviews. You are an extremely talented writer. This story is amazing so far. I can't wait to read more!

Nice epilogue. But I'm so disappointed that we didn't get to see Edie's wedding and her and Anna's reaction to Edward's new appearance! Maybe you should write another epilogue. :)

As much as this chapter was interesting to read, I'm not sure if it is entirely keeping with canon. I believe Rosalie, Emmett, Alice, and Jasper were all with them the first time Edward met the succubus sisters. In Rosalie's story, she told Bella that she'd thought Edward might make a match because of "all those females!" when they were in Alaska before moving to Forks. I think it's possible for them to have met briefly. But if they'd had an extended visit before 2003, why would Rosalie have thought something more might have come of it? It might possibly work...but it just feels forced. It feels more natural that the first time Edward spent a significant amount of time with Tanya and her sisters was when the whole family was together.

It's been a little while since I last reviewed this. (was it chapter 3?) Anyway, I had to pause here to say how perfectly you described Elizabeth's mother-love for Edward. I can really tell that you're drawing on your own maternal instincts to describe it. I was furious with the fictional nurse and doctor who tried to keep her from her son. And the reference to how a mother's body remembers the connection and a child is always a part of you, no matter how old he is, brought tears to my eyes. In my heart it feels true!

Beautifully described! Now, excuse me, I need to go give my son a hug... ;-)

hi, i just wanted to let you know that i finnished reading the whole of your book. and can i just tell you that its the best book i have read in a long, long time. the book had sooo much emotion to it. it was lovely. i would love to see you make a book with how carlisle met esme, rose, emmet and alice and jasper. i think you would write an amazing other boook

I'm really enjoying this story so far. I adore awkward teenage Edward fumbling with trying to please his cousin. And I love how historically accurate you've made it. It's refreshing to read something that's canon with Stephenie's works and yet still original!

I've added this to my C2 (Community) for well-written Canon Twilight fanfics. If you join the community it will help it to show up in searches so more people can find your great story!

A really nice story. Well, the thought that Edward entertained, certain warns about his life to come later, when he rebels against Carlisle!

Well, well, well, the Denali sisters are more direct than other vampires, that is for sure. This is going to be an interesting visit!

Awesome storytelling. It must be so hard to realise what you will be going through, hearing both thoughts and voices. This will be fun.

Oh, quite a change from canon, but I look forward to reading what happens next.