Hmn. I can't say anything particularly constructive on this chapter except to improve your english.

Interesting story about your family... I am sad I know so little about vietnamese history, I can't find any vietnamese serials dubbed into English.

I am at episode 64 now... sigh the good old days of the good Hong Guk Young

Hmn I think by the time Wonbin dies, Hong Guk is already on the path to evil.

Ah so this is where the mysterious Jeong Hu Gyeom/Seong Song Yeon ship comes from.

Remember how desperately unhappy Wonbin was.

I like the end! It's very,...How should I put this?...,fitting!:D

Yay for the new chapter! Good story line. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Good chapter unnie! I liked it and Queen Hyoeui eas splendid! You know...the categ. for Dong Yi and Dae Janggeum are up. If you want to post any sory on them I'd be really gratefull.

Unnie! This was very short...It is funny how ChoBi yells around! Really love it..._

Unni! This was great!:D I love it!Also I see you are improving.

And just so you know Yushin was forced to marry Qri because he had alredy said that he loved Deokman!

This is a good beggining. I took the libety of correcting some mistakes and I'll send you a copy soon. Work on your stories.

Ta-ta!:D XOXO