Holy shyt long chapters aweeeeesooooome! I really like it so far.

Really. I'm want to read more! D8

ALSKJSDHSKH!

I. HAVE. IT.

Zek'jaf's father was the human; THAT'S why he's so pale and his tusks are so small.

That's also the reason that his mother is mourning him.

DO I WIN A BISCUT?

If I am, in fact, wrong; then you can bitch-slap me and tell me to stop being so fucking stupid and NO YOU DON'T GET A FUCKING BISCUT YOU IGNORAMUS; AND OHMYGAWD WHY DO YOU HATE ME SO MUCH MUMMY?

Ahem. Yes.

Anyway, thank you for writing such a brilliant story and I'm looking forward to reading more. :)

I miss playing the game. I had to cancel my subscription due to money issues, but I love what you have done with this story and I am sad that the characters have left you in the lurch with no more inspiration to continue.

It makes me want to reactivate the game again, and take a character through, just to create a story with it.

if one could have their own playable world where you could have more than one character to control, and you could have both factions active, I would role play this type of scenario just for the fun of it.

I am still wondering what challenge you mentioned that they would be facing together. XD

I hope that one day you return to this story.

I am watching...

I am waiting.

I love world of warcraft and I have always been interested in a Troll Human relationship. I think Troll Men are sexy. XD

So far, So good. I like how you started, and I am eager for the next chapter. I may stay up all night reading again. LOL

I'm all sorts of curious about Lara since we've only been getting Zek'jaf's POV. I hope you continue this someday.

This story is yelling UPDATE ME! I couldn't put this on the last chapter because I had already reviewed that one. But please, please, please update this.

This story is absolutely amazing. I really hope you update soon! :)

Really dig this so far, would love to see it continue!

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Brat

great story! I love your writing style! can't wait for another chapter. I really want to know why Lara didn't help him though, especially since she said she wanted to pay him back...

I'm really enjoying this story so far. I love your writing style and your attention to detail really captivates the reader. The plot has a lot of promise too, and it's refreshing to see that not only your two main characters are developing a story and character development. The bit about Neetya and her M all but broke my heart!

Keep up the good work, and I'm patiently waiting for your next update. :)

Awesome! :B

Ukpbe - that was me trying to type the i loved neetya's story :] im a little shady on what the undead are, so that was a great piece of the story for me. my absolute favorite part?

"For only a moment, she seemed to be suspended in the reds and pinks of the sun's last rays of light, her nose pointing toward her knees and her toes pointing toward each other. Zek'jaf was not entirely certain what name he could give this emotion, because he had never experienced it before. Blind curiosity? Muted interest? She was not beautiful to him, but surely she was beautiful to those of her race, even with the dirt on her cheeks and her chapped lips. As a troll, he thought, entertaining himself while she made ripples with the stick in the water, she might be at least somewhat attractive. He tried to imagine Lara with lavish violet skin and adorably curved tusks, but all that came to his mind at this was an image of Zul-kraa, so he banished the thought entirely."

I wanna read more about them two... this was so cute hahaha why did Lara not say anything to the mage people? AH! can't escape cliffhangers!

I think this might be my favorite chapter so far; I loved Neetya's slice of back story and Zek's failed courtship of Zul-kraa 3 Hoorah for deep characters!

But ho'! What will happen next? D:

rare is the human in wow who would see past predjudice. but the armored nameless guy makes me bervous, he's gonna do something dumb i think XD great job with this! so glad to see another chapter added.