the mustery voice sounds like duo to me, don't know why he is being so secretive about it but the dialogue sounds very duoesque. -grin-

I really liked the "inner thought bubbles" you gave a couple of times in the fic so far ::I think these are really cool:: The fic itself probably isn't the greatest for someone with zero Gundam Wing background to start off with (yeah it's sad I've never been exposed to Gundam Wing), since the characters aren't explained very well. (lol, most people know who they are by heart, so no fault of you!) The story sounds really interesting so far. I'd like to see where this goes! Are the mechas going to get involved at all? :-P Lol. Hope to read more of this in the future! Abby

What did Herro and the others besides Quarta do that made them traitors Sanc

Your view of things is very dementented just because your hate heero and relena couplings does not mean every one does i happen to like them and think guy x guy is sick and mae by sick minded people

yay! you finnally updated! hehehe Rei please go as fast as you can with the next chapter i wanna know what happends

Alright... A couple of things that I wanna say. First off, don't write yaoi relationships until you're ready, and I hope you don't feel pressured to write yaoi because that's what most people write (That's what happened to me at first...) Form your own opinion of the series and write whatever seems comfortable.

Secondly, Relena can be annoying. (I hated her in the series), but you should try watching the Japanese version. She's much less annoying in that one, and she's not annoying at all in Endless Waltz. Plus she's the only real match for Heero in my opinion, because Heero is always saying her name NOT Duo's, but anyway, everyone's got their own theories about the preferences of the pilots.

Thirdly,I really like what you're doing with this story, and I hope that you don't change the pairing. A couple of problems with the grammar, but I can beta read for you if you want, just email me. Keep up the good work!

Symee

P.S. OOps... This turned into more of a rant about yaoi and Relena than a review... Sorry 'bout that!

I was looking throught the stories and i found yours a few days ago I thougth that maybe it would not be continued I'm glad that I was wrong your story is very intriguing great plot...please finish..I was having a hard time imagining how it would end

whats wrong with relena and whats with guy x guy relationships anyways not that i hate it i just dont understand it ...

You better not start to change the role of this story just because you got to right this story like you did before you started hating relena or you will ruin this story

Nice fic! Ilove HxR fics. Romantic even. Maybe u should consider correcting ur spelling and grammer? Is Quatre realy gay? I thought he was striaght as an arrow. Oh well. And when ur writing a story (I'm sure ur english teaher taught u)to use pastence sentences. Not she goes, she went. See easy as cake!_*

Pastence!_! Just thought u ought to know.

Keep up the good work! I'll be looking for up dates!

Lots of luv,

LadyD.

What do you mean everyone hates H and R i don't hate them! And i really liked this story cause it was H and R. Are you going to change it and make them hate each other? I hope not cause i really want a happy ending! Please please please leave the fic a Heero and Relena fic!

It sounds interesting I would love to read the first chapter soon, so could you please put it up, thankyou. -

I like it! Please continue soon.

Not EVERYONE hates HxR. Just most people do, and, more often then not, it is usually the Yoai-s. Now, don't get me wrong, I like Yoai and I think that Trowa and Quatre make a cute pair, but, I do feel that Relena changed from that whiny little brat from the first episode. You can really tell the difference when you watch the first episode and then watch the movie: The Endless Waltz. But if you Hate Relena, then you hate Relena, to each their own- as I always say.

I have to say that you've done a great job of keeping everyone in Character, that is a hard thing to do.

Prinder

Do us all a favor and quit; your story sucks!