Hi,this is a great story are you going to do a follow up? There's so much you could do with Isobel's Character but either way I really liked it!

I really like this. You did really well with Isobel's character. I wasn't sure if I liked her or not...well, I'm still not sure. She seemed a little bipolar at times, but at least she's not some perfect one-dimensional Barbie doll of a character. I think you should continue this with Isobel reuniting with Angel. I would definitely read it. I'm currently beginning a story about Angel and her sister, but my version of Angel's sister is older than her, and not quite as bipolar. Keep your eyes open for the first chapter in the next few days. But anyway, good story!

Peace, Jourdyn

You in no way made an idiot. Great story.

Oh gosh, you did an amazing job with this.

well done, I like the potential that lies in Isobel to be a part of Angel's life. She's part blubbering idiot, but mostly because of her up bringing and not seeing her brother in five years.