Wow! This was really great! Story wasn't even close to what I was imagining it to be. Really great twist and I love the change of direction in the story. and just wow. It was so easy to picture everything and yea. I fell in love.

Hello, Hairann.

I just finished reading your story Balance and I would love to tell you that I was intrigued the whole time. As in some other stories I have read you do not lack details and you kept a nice pace throughout the story. There was a perfect blend of emotions in this story and I wanted to tell you that you created a wonderful story. Your grammar was refreshingly practically perfect and I caught no spelling errors (not that I was intentionally looking; it is now just second nature now).

I mostly just wanted to compliment you on this great story and tell you to also NEVER stop writing if you love it, because you are wonderfully gifted at it.

-With sincerity,

InvisiblePuppeteer.

I really enjoyed this story. It was wonderful. I also like the originality.

This was a great story! Loved it! I'm rapidly becoming a fan of your stories! .

Well, that certainly a very interesting and unique story. Who would have thought that Midoriko caused that much trouble?

Huh. Very interesting fic here. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Wow, that was amazing. 24,000 words in 1 chapter! I love it: it was believable yet different and quite interesting. Great job!

-Non Veritas Sine Integritas-

-BreeilnaBane The Apprentice

O.M.G IT WAS AMAZING I LOVE IT BEST SESSKAG FIC EVER :)

this story is amazing.! its like one of the best one-shots ever.! even if it is longer than one its still counts. and i almost cried at the end (very emotional weirdo like me).

This story hits me on alot of deep personal levels, great plot, it makes sense, I really enjoyed reading it, thank you for writing it, you are a fantastic author.

OMG! it was freaking good... when i bgan to read i could not stop... and when i was finhisd* it i was so touched inside... i loved it...

*don't no if it's spelt right...

You done a great job on this, I love what you made it into.

Wow! I really enjoyed this story! You wrote the story in a way that made it so it didn't sound generic and boring. You made a plot that really enthralled me and I couldn't stop reading once it started to really pick up! I love how you made it so they didn't instantly fall for each other as so many people do, I mean don't get me wrong those can be good stories too, but this story... this story I really enjoyed seeing how it developed and how the two main characters had problems and had insecurities that helped make them seem more like real people instead of some invincible god! You showed a great skill for developing a plot and making it understandable but at the same time complicated (Midoriko's story) enough that you didn't get bored and decide that you don't want to read it because you know where the plot is going after the first couple of paragraphs. There is only one thing you left out... what happened to Rin? she was in few paragraphs then she just dropped off... Other than that little problem, the story was one of the best stories I have read period. And coming from me that is probably quite the complement (spend ALL day reading fanfiction or novels only stopping to use the bathroom and maybe two meals a day...). I can honestly say that I loved your story, thank you for taking the time to write it.

Very beautifully written. Loved it

i didn't know whether to cry or laugh at the ending... :/

great story and I especailly liked the part where Kagome was attempting to describe love and indiscreetly asked him if he was gay! major laughs at that! I thought that the plot was very well thought out and very not cliche as a lot of Kag/Sess stories seem to be.

I've always thought you were an amazing Kag/Sess writer, because you do so well with keeping Sesshomaru in character which admitedly I find to be a very difficult thing. I always want to give him more emotion than what he actually would give in the anime, though admitedly he's a bit more talkative in the manga, so really I suppose it depends on whether someone is critiquing you based on the anime or the manga...

In any case, keep up the good work because I really do enjoy reading your fictions!

Always,

Serenity