The message is great. Sad, yes.

But it doesn't sound so right.

I think this is a lovely poem!

Carry on writing these!

x x x booklove x x x

i hate losing people i love. :( I can honestly say that i feel your pain.

so beautiful.

It almost moved me to tears. It was really touching, and the perfect way to depict grief.

Your loved one would be very proud of you x

Really good. It touched my heart and made me feel so sorry for you.

-iLOovehim. Gedz Yeah

I thought your poem was very moving please continue writting !

Love Ice cream xx

OH ! You made me cry for an hour that was beautyful ! I'm so sorry to hear about your loved one !

God bless you , Milly .x

It's great. Of course I've never read Vicky Angel but the poems good. Well done Cakey.

Geddy x