no offense, but that could have been way better.

The story flowed well, the characters said the right things. But all the chapters were too short, and the story almost had no...feeling, inside. It was a good idea, but I reccomend going into more depth and talking time In writing what you need to write.
Again, this is constructive criticism, please don't take it too hard, just improve on your other stories from now on.

This is so good

Wow, this story is so beautiful. I love the pair Claire and Peter. I saw the whole serie until season four. I loved it.

I have to practise my english, because in germany the serie is send until season 3.

Your story is so awesome. Please write more such short story.

Thank you from Germany

It was perfect way to end it they r so perfect and writing like this deserves all he devotion from us readers

Maria

D'aww, yay :)

"Is this a dream? Was any of this... real?

Despite if she was imagining things, she ran into the man's arms. Tears of happiness rolled down her face."

Aww :)

Awah, thanks. I shall knock 'em dead indeed. Just for you. ;D :L

D'aw. So cute! It's lovely...and I think a part of me melted at:

Is this a dream? Was any of this... real?

Despite if she was imagining things, she ran into the man's arms. Tears of happiness rolled down her face.

Peter...!

Brilliant story. Can't wait to read more from you. :D

thanks for the mention too

ILH

That was great they will b together

Maria

Aww! That's so cute, but poor Peter for not taking the chance of his dreams...shows how much he cares about Claire, though... :)

Poor girl just as conflicted as peter

MariA

Absolutely loving the story. It's amazing! I hope you continue this and give them a lovely ending :) You're a really outstanding writer. I hope to see more paire from you :D

Please feel free to check out my numerous paire oneshots and series'.

Well done and keep it up,

ILH.

Aww, poor Claire! Loved that last line... Can't wait to find out what'll happen next.

Aww, this is so cute. The start of a really good story. Please update soon, you've got me interested :)

Just one thing I noticed in that last chapter, it's 'passed' not 'past' :)

POOR CLAIRE AND PETER THAT WAS WONDERFUL

MARIA

That was great always thinking of her

Maria

Another great drabble! I like the plot of this story :) Keep the good work! :)