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| Edelin 2008-06-21 ch 7,  | abuseNice chapter! I like a lot your writting skills! |
| Edelin 2008-06-21 ch 6, | abuseΗοw beatiful... She seems so pure... I hope things will be all right! |
| Edelin 2008-06-21 ch 5, | abuseΤhis Esther for some reason resembles Sakura in a way... Nice chapter! |
| Edelin 2008-06-21 ch 4, | abuseΜm it's a bit Sad if you think about it... Yue won't be able to keep one promise... |
| Edelin 2008-06-21 ch 3, | abuseΤhat aunt Esther is the relative that Syaoran come's from right? And it was surprising that she called Cerberus, Kero like Sakura |
| Edelin 2008-06-21 ch 2, | abuseΙ never imagined that Clow had problems with his family or that they wouldn't approve... Very nice thought! |
| Edelin 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting begining i have to say. The image of Clow and the guardians is magnigicent! |
| Long-Live-Christopher 2008-05-20 ch 19, | abuseThis was truly a great story, and so tragic. THere aren't enough stories out there like this, with Clow and his uadrians. Awesome job at the angst, especially Clow's death and Touya's. However, due to my INTENSE hatred of all original charectors, especially those of the female variety, I can't even think about continueing to read. It's just my personal taste. lottsa love, LLC |
| an angel of darkness 2008-02-23 ch 24, | abuseHey! well, I am sorry to say that I love you for writing such a wonderful fic adn that I hate you for not finishing it... well, all I can say is I love your fic adn I think it's really interesting how everything is coming to be. the passing of time is very well exposed and even though I sometimes get a little bit confused with all the different reincarnations, I think you have portrayed them very well. Just one comment, I was surprised when kero was so cruel with will, I know he was upset and everything and I know he was right when he commented that yue had been quite mean with sakura, but, I though that as it was already the second cycle he would be nicer.. . it's just a reflection, but what I really have to say is that I loved when poor kero had to succomb to a beautifully laid cake! anyway, please update soon because cliff hangers (because that is what it is) are not nice at all for your readers... anyway, keep up the amazing work, and thank you. angie |
| Evnissyn 2005-02-16 ch 24, | abusewowwowwowwow! I wish I could write like this! But ... where's the rest of it?! |
| Mitsukie M. 2005-01-25 ch 24, anon. | abuseI love It ! I can't wait to read the rest ! Please hurry and write more. |
| GoldenRat 2004-10-27 ch 24, | abuseA really nice continuation. |
| Elodea 2004-10-02 ch 4, | abuseGood story so far But I just thought I'd point out; towards the end of this chapter Clow mentions that he has yet to meet a human that will not die or *has not died*...I get the meaning but it kinda implies that everyone he knows is dead... just a thought |
| Bishie Burgers Are Yummy 2004-08-28 ch 22, | abuseI love this ficcy! *glomps TamChronin* Please continue to update! |
| Bishie Burgers Are Yummy 2004-08-28 ch 21, | abuseNO! I am not ready for the end! I don't want it to end! And what's worse is school starts in 4 days and I won't be able to read the chappies so often. *cries* I really love this ficcy. Keep going!!^-^ |