Awesome... Very creative

Some of the beats were off.. but it was still good!

And by beats being "off" I mean...

"He lives in the sewers of Derry " 9 beats

"and he's a giant spider who's probably really hairy" 15 beats... you'd have to rush to get that in , which is kind of a novice mistake.. You can make a poem, and it's good and stuff, but if you want to make it BETTER :D , you should count the beats.. I'm just passing this tidbit along, I'm not good at poems myself, but I know what I should do if I want to write a good poem, and it's to make sure the beats are "even"

And you used the wrong "lose" .. you put "loose" ... that's a very common mistake.. " I lose my temper" "she is a loose woman" .. be careful with those two words .3.

nice

Uh, don't know if this would qualify as humor, but its still really good. I'm a huge fan of IT.

One peeve. Pennywise is a demon entity, not from outer space. Other than that it was good.

LOL classic, i love IT. Pennywise was one of my favorites growing up, along with Freddy Krueger.

Damn, after reading this i now have the urge to search my dvd collection and watch the movie :)

It was a fun read.