Awww what a wonderful ended. I loved this!

well this was crazy rushed lol it was going fine but then i felt like you forgot 10 chapters in the middle somewhere..? how does it go from we hate eachother to blow job to i don't even know why you of all people would be visiting my father to practically hospital sex to hey wow dad's awake from his coma! happily ever after, the end..in 2 chapters? lol they should've met at the hospital like both visiting his father & then sasuke would have to explain why.. they would become friends/lovers etc it has a lot of potential.. what's there is written decently.. it could be really good..if you fixed it

awww

Omigosh! U brought out my true fangirlyness with the last paragraph! Omg they gonna get married! *screams and faints* hehe i luved it! Erite a sequel please! D

Yay! happy ending! I keep reading stories with sad endings and it's getting old. So this was nice! Sasuke proposing YAY!

Awwwww! That was sweet! But too many flashbacks! DX Lol, I still loved it, though! _

This was soo cute! Thanks for the great read, keep up the good work!

Great story. It was short and sweet. I love flashbacks, and you did a good job of capturing both sides of the story. Keep up the awesome work.

I think you should do another chapter, just a short one, where he does ask him!

love the story. amazing!

That was quite the happy ending and I loved it

aw incrediblely cute story and love the ending!

NNOOOOOOO! PLEASE! THAT WAS A CLIFF HANGER! I WANT TO KNOW WHATT HAPPENED NEXT! PLLEEEAAASSSEEEE! Love the story! :3

-Love Nitrea ;)

love it

great story :)

Very cute!