Ermm.. okay so Maddy is supposed to be slightly emo...

and, I think, that Caitlin wouldn't really go for the 'preppy' guy, I mean you did read on how she dissed 'Aberzombies' right?

Also, maybe more Chad? Please?

awesome . lol it was funny because my name is caitlin and people usally spell it kaitlyn but u spelled it right! More please!1

you did a great jiob i wish there was more parts. i loved it . i never herd of these charters but i looked like it was fun to read and it was!

thanks! i love this story. i cant wait for the next chapter

please update when you can! this is so good!

Hi, this is really good! I have some constructive criticism for you though. I think you should focus a little more on Emily being sick. I mean, leukemia is cancer! She could die, and i think that Maddie should have a little more worried, gloomy tone about her. But good job!

Why!...is there no more! :'(

Wow, Loved it!

Haha! Cool story! Update, update, update!

Great story, keep going!

Nice story I love it! Keep writing

3 Roxy

Where the heck did that come from? haha funny stuff. Not cool about the dissected pig though.

3 Roxy

haha nice little twist ] I kinda thought the two words were "We're moving." but I like this way better.

3 Roxy

wow that was sad!

haha, is it steakk or chicken? i luv it!