|Reviews for Immoral|
| Iron Lord 4/2/13 . chapter 20
This story is really awesome because all of the chapters were excellent and i hope you don't give up on it. (_)
| Guest 3/17/13 . chapter 11
is vamp gay?
| Guest 3/17/13 . chapter 10
happy. if it ends sad then i have wasted time reading this
| icequenn3125 1/18/13 . chapter 21
ok from the beging i have benn HOOKED so plz plz plz plz plz plz plz write the next chp
| Rioshi-sama 1/17/13 . chapter 1
Double D's one lucky guy!
| Dreamer of night 12/29/12 . chapter 21
this story was amazing! i am srsly hooked. update soon, ja?
| it's jusst me 12/1/12 . chapter 21
I'll be honest, I haven't seen the show Ed, Edd, n Eddy since I was like, I dunno maybe 9 years old? I'm eighteen now, and I just recently started to fall in love with the show once again. I didn't realize how much I missed it. I recently discovered fanfiction for it, so I decided to check it out. Even from a young age, I fell in love with the idea of Marie together with Edd. They were always my favorite characters! Especially Edd, he is so sweet and so damn adorable for a cartoon character at least!
I really love this story, it was my first exposure to the world of Ed, Edd, n Eddy fanfiction. I'm excited for what you have in store for us next.
| Yoyotko 11/20/12 . chapter 21
Very nice fan fic, normally i tend to stray away from stories that involve original characters, but the way they have been written; especially their puns and jokes, makes them very easy to relate to. Also can't wait for more Double D and Marie encounters, I will surely be doing back flips when this is updated.
| SpideyLives 10/6/12 . chapter 21
Oh Man! I love this series! Color me impressed, this series kicks ass. Keep goin when your not busy haha
| blackrose0917 9/14/12 . chapter 21
more! please update soon. :D
| blackrose0917 9/13/12 . chapter 19
well... that was really nice... i've gone from the beginning up to chapter 19 in one night... xD
| JasonVUK 9/12/12 . chapter 21
Thus far I have most definately enjoyed reading this. :-) I really like Marie's interactions with Edd through out this whole story and could definately wish for more :-)
I am really excited about your next update.
| Ammish 9/10/12 . chapter 20
Yaay, new chapter! (Referencing to CH21 since I already wrote a review for that, but since it's complete and I can't submit another review... CH20 it is. Just pretend it's CH21)
The original characters really do shine out in this story, though I kinda feared that the other existing characters (Edd, Nazz, Eddy, etc) are kinda becoming more background. But I'm satisfied that Nazz got her time to shine and even hold a discussion with Marie despite Nazz cuddling up to Edd, which Marie doesn't like, of course. She definitely still retains the territorial attitude of her 'boyfriend' like she has done in the original cartoon series. Somethings never change for her!
Carrie, Davey and Vamp are top-notch as always. My preference is other existing characters like Kevin and Eddy need more spotlight, especially Kevin. But it might not suit your story entirely since it is all told from Marie's point of view.
All in all, love this chapters 3
(PS: I may tend to review singular or in groups. It is much easier for me to review a group of chapters as a whole, but this chapter had enough for me to review by itself)
| WaterAngel'sTears 9/10/12 . chapter 21
Awww, I wish Marie would tell Carrie..or anyone really. Then Bam, She cut her hand with that Exacto Knife. Oh man, I was not expecting that. I can't help but feel bad for Marie. Edd was there with Nazz all cuddled to him, comforting her from her fight with Kevin (Which I kinda agree with Marie on.). I mean, I know he's hurt about their fight, but still I feel like he should know better. Maybe Davey, Carrie, Or Vamp should try to get her to tell someone or at least fully explain things to them. I mean if it was me in her position, I would have no one after too long. Anyways, I was glad that she sort of opened up to Nazz even if it was interrupted. I think something big will need to happen for Marie to ask for help. Like the douchebag to do something even more extreme to the point where Marie knows beyond a doubt that she needs help and now before things get even worse. Well, I hope you update it again as soon as you can! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens at the hospital.
| Iron Lord 9/2/12 . chapter 21
Please update soon really like the story