 DBZLover4Ever 5/30/10 . chapter 1Great story. Very cute! |
 pyrojaniac 4/21/03 . chapter 1Very nice. Is that it though?
Luna |
 lime 9/14/02 . chapter 1 kawaii please write more |
 Nene 4/23/02 . chapter 1 that was soooo ccuuttee!_ nice to see sooomthing written about there everyday lives not just fighting. i hope you write more. |
 Meesh 2/19/02 . chapter 1awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that was adorable! _ so cute! |
 TheDarkAngel1 2/17/02 . chapter 1such a cute litte story |
 Hannio 2/15/02 . chapter 1 AAAAAAHHHHHHHH how cute. Please write more. Pretty please? |
 Stormy 2/3/02 . chapter 1 *giggles at the kawaii little saiyajin boys* Awww...
*glomps ANM* Dedicated to me? *hugs* I'm honored! Now you have to write a part 2! |
 AniDragon aka Riona-chan 2/2/02 . chapter 1Kawaii! I haven't read DBZ fics for a while, so it was nice to see one under one of my fav. authors. Anyway, that was really cute! I enjoyed it! Keep up the good work! |
 Hot Ice2 1/29/02 . chapter 1aww! this one is really sweet! I've read a lot of fics that involve Trunks and Goten, but they hardly ever really have things happen to show what good friends that the boys are. I like to see friendships grow in fics more than romance, though I like both. So far you're doing a really good job portraying all of the characters!
Meredith |
 MiniMe 1/27/02 . chapter 1Very well done! The flow of the story was great, and so were the characterizations of everyone, I thought that you nailed Vegeta right on the head, and Chichi too. You really wrote this well, you included detail and yet kept up the pace of the story, I really enjoyed it although I do have a couple questions.
How long is this after Buu? Was Goku training the whole day or is he off training Uub right now? And although hitting the rock wouldn't hurt Goten I must admit that it did do its job very well, extremely good job. Is this a friendship fic or is it going to be T/G? Either would be fun, I have a feeling whatever you do will turn out well.
So until next time! |
 kasygirlkawaiibubbles girl 1/26/02 . chapter 1 VERY,VERY GOOD!I like it! Are there any more chapters after this one? I'm sure theyed be most interesting!P |