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| pyrojaniac 2003-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. Is that it though? ~Luna |
| lime 2002-09-14 ch 1, anon. | abusekawaii please write more |
| Nene 2002-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was soooo ccuuttee!!!^_^ nice to see sooomthing written about there everyday lives not just fighting. i hope you write more. |
| Meesh 2002-02-19 ch 1, | abuseawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that was adorable!!!!!! ^_^ so cute! |
| TheDarkAngel1 2002-02-17 ch 1, | abusesuch a cute litte story |
| Hannio 2002-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAAAAAAHHHHHHHH how cute. Please write more. Pretty please? |
| Stormy 2002-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuse*giggles at the kawaii little saiyajin boys* Awww... *glomps ANM* Dedicated to me? *hugs* I'm honored! ^^ Now you have to write a part 2! ^^ |
| AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2002-02-02 ch 1, | abuseKawaii!!! I haven't read DBZ fics for a while, so it was nice to see one under one of my fav. authors. Anyway, that was really cute! I enjoyed it! Keep up the good work! |
| Hot Ice2 2002-01-29 ch 1, | abuseaww! this one is really sweet! I've read a lot of fics that involve Trunks and Goten, but they hardly ever really have things happen to show what good friends that the boys are. I like to see friendships grow in fics more than romance, though I like both. So far you're doing a really good job portraying all of the characters! Meredith |
| MiniMe 2002-01-27 ch 1, | abuseVery well done! The flow of the story was great, and so were the characterizations of everyone, I thought that you nailed Vegeta right on the head, and Chichi too. You really wrote this well, you included detail and yet kept up the pace of the story, I really enjoyed it although I do have a couple questions. How long is this after Buu? Was Goku training the whole day or is he off training Uub right now? And although hitting the rock wouldn't hurt Goten I must admit that it did do its job very well, extremely good job. Is this a friendship fic or is it going to be T/G? Either would be fun, I have a feeling whatever you do will turn out well. So until next time! |
| kasygirl(kawaiibubbles girl... 2002-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseVERY,VERY GOOD!!!I like it! Are there any more chapters after this one? I'm sure theyed be most interesting!!=P |