This totally sounds like something McGee would do. Using the haircut conversation to frame the story was clever and cute.

Excellent!

Fantastic. I loved the running joke about the haircut. And in the last bit, with the voices of the team swirling around him, I could identify everyone perfectly, good voices.

Lastly: TIM-Centric H/C! I was beginning to think the only way I would get some of that was to write it myself. So you? Are a beautiful person. Good to know there's a small cadre of devoted Tim-fans out there.

"then your long hippie hair last year.” “It wasn’t that long!” “For you, Probie? It might as well have been to your waist." - I LOVED Tim's longish hair in season 6 AND the buzz cut (even though Sean Murray's mom hated the buzz cut, according to Pauley Perrette in the season 6 DVD commentary).

"there was loud roar and Tim felt himself thrown up and then fall downward...before he hit the ground and blacked out." - That should be: 'there was a loud roar and Tim felt himself thrown up and then fall downward...before he hit the ground and blacked out.'

I do hope his follicles were not damaged, or the hair might stay that short length after being singed.

You did a great job with writing everyone's unique voice.

Fire is my #1 thing to be avoided at all cost *shiver*. Your description of the melting walls was positively creepy. Great little short, thanks for posting.