 magdilen 9/16/08 . chapter 4That was so sad- great job. |
 Yasha147 3/6/06 . chapter 4that was so wonderful, i love ur writing style i really do, please finish this |
 conathena213 2/13/05 . chapter 4hey!
i just wanted to say that i enjoyed your story. it was the first time i heard it from the mom's pt. of view. i think you did a good job though the mother didn't come off as a mother but as a very young adult. the ending was well written and rather poetic. i liked it. the jellyfish made me laugh. i imagined a big blob of slime oozing all over the place. anyway, keep up w/ the good work. |
 Vilja 5/19/04 . chapter 4 It's truly beautiful.
Vilja |
 Fiery Angel 3/15/04 . chapter 4 WOW! O.o
that was so great.
you've got a natural talent.
pleez finish thtis fanfic, it rocks out loud! |
 a dreamer's attic 11/9/03 . chapter 4wow..Iwhish I could write somthing that good.. |
 schumie 11/7/03 . chapter 4Oh my God, I cried. |
 schumie 11/7/03 . chapter 2I absolutely love the fact that this is told by Kagome's mother. It gives it such an approach that seems so real, and so sad. It's much more believable and touching than if it were to be told through someone else. I always wondered how Mama could look so happy and act as if nothing happened every time Kagome would return. That takes a very strong person. On to the next section. |
 schumie 11/7/03 . chapter 1I don't knkow why, but for some reason, I just absolutely love the prologue. It just..I don't know. I love it. Thought I'd tell you that... |
 imfamous monk 7/23/03 . chapter 4 Sweet Mother this was excellent! EXTREEMELY well written, original, creative, intricate, wry, and dramatic. One cannot help but read this aloud for a more sorrowful effect! This is truly good writing, please, for Buddha's sake, continue! |
 MUMSI 5/15/03 . chapter 4Damn you, Damn you and your amazeing writing. YOU MADE ME CRY!
oh, I have just added this to my favorite stories, oh, what a wonderfully written story. Please write more, I know you updated a long time ago, so please, please, please write more. PLEASE? *falls to floor wailing*
-MUMSI
that was inredible |
 Cin of an Angel 4/24/03 . chapter 4Okay, I thought the last chapter was sad, but it does not even compare to this one. I actually cried, more than just one tear, not bawling though mind you. Good job, it shows how wonderous you are if you can get such a reaction out of your readers!
Yes, Inu Yasha was done perfectly. And the little parts between the two were perfect also.
Hm, I'm still kind of sad thinking about this. |
 Cin of an Angel 4/24/03 . chapter 3Oh, I laughed so hard when she thought 'Higirashi Inu Yasha'. It just sounded so funny, I agree with Kag's mom totally.
Hm, this was such a sad chapter, especially at the end. Not to say it wasn't good though. I wonder what will happen though. |
 Cin of an Angel 4/24/03 . chapter 2I know the photo thing has been done before, but I absolutely luved the way you pulled it off.
And hm? What was Kagome's mom's last comment about? Makes me wonder, and want to read more!
Hehe and I really like how you did Kagome's mother. It seems like she knows everything in a motherly way, and she does have worry, even though she masks it well. |
 Cin of an Angel 4/24/03 . chapter 1Wow, I do like how you set this prolouge up. I'm really curious to what this story will be about though, but it sounds interesting.
Is it just about Kagome's family from now on or what?
It isn't only the promise of a good story, but also your writing. You made this really interesting without trying to hard! |