Vivalene you just made a VERY fatal mistake that had costed her life! she should of just left Bakura alone, especially since he has a yami that stole and murdered people.

Can't say I feel sorry for her lol

One question: Do Vivalene has a crush (I don't know how it's spelled) at bakura or make him change his mind or what?

great 1-shot. love it, very funny 2.

Hmmm, I havent't read something of yours in forever so I thought since you have a million stories why not read some old things I've never seen?

I liked it. Good flow, sood grammar, just so very awesome.

SSAA

Ooh, scary, sinister, and pitting two villains against each other... I like it. :) Great drabble.

Ew. BACK OFF YOU CREEPY OLD LADY! And don't you DARE touch Ryou!

There. I feel better now. _

Great story. I'm glad that Yami Bakura got her in the end.

Wow! Great job! I really enjoyed this. And I especially loved the second to last paragraph. Brilliant! :D

Someone just got owned

Vivalene is still up to no good, but yay/lol for Yami Bakura putting her in her place! *raspberry blow* Even if it was kinda... creepy...

WHY? WHY DID YOU LET HER DO THAT TO POOR INNOCENT RYO? I DIED... At least she died! YES! SHE DESERVED TO DIE! BUWHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Well, this assistant wanted the power of the Millineum Ring, she got a TASTE of it! NO ONE messes with Ryo Bakura without tisking the wrath of his Yami! Time for a PENALTY GAME! And I wonder what the game will be this time?

Why is Ryou always attacked by the most random and craziest of people in both the actual show and fanfiction?

Ryou seriously needs a hug after all this. :)

I liked your temptress. She was sexual and driven and it was great.

The last sentence was great with the whole key motif going on and of course with Yami Bakura taking the key I assume her soul now resides in.

Why do I have a bad feeling about Bakura eating anything Vivalene prepared...?

And very intersting about the keys... And her knowing about the Ring...

Poor Bakura! But Yami B switching in was awesome. And yikes at the penalty game!

"'Why, They're keys.'"

That made my day for some reason. xDD

By the way, this was definetly interesting. Seeing the old Yami Bakura, I mean. Always fun to see a new side of things.