I really enjoyed this.

Course, I apparently started my shipping days early, lol, because I couldn't have been more than 6 (and I was a few years late to the party by then), but I remember wanting Miss Ferrell and Daddy Warbucks to marry and live happily ever after with their adopted little girl Annie.

;)

Just goes to show.

Sometimes, even the youngest of us are romantics.

Anyway, this was well-written and enjoyable as a character study.

Thank you for writing it.

Shae

I love this! Please add more to it :O)

This is adorable! So in character, and I love that you worked in the fact that Grace is wearing her hair down (and a much softer, prettier dress too!) in the very next scene! Lovely job!

This is absolutely adorable.

This is so cute! please write another

Aww! I love the way you wrote this poor Grace! :( xx

this is terrific! more please

sweet and sad, yet hopeful! a very nice story.

AL

This is really good. I like your pacing and style, it's done well. I think you got Grace pretty down pat.(Who is my favorite character in Annie.)

For a one shot, it was put together and complete, and I hope you continue. There are too few good Grace/Oliver stories. And as stated, this is one of 'em!

This was delightful! I think you captured Grace's no-nonsense persona quite well, but managed to also reveal her sensual side - the one she keeps hidden so well.

The night at the movies was definitely a turning point for Oliver and Grace, and you did a great job in portraying that. The aftershave on the handkerchief was a nice, subtle touch.

I'd love to see you explore more of their relationship. You seem to have your finger on the pulse of their characters.

Great job!

Good Job! Keep it coming! Please?

Very good- I don't know if you've read Jane Eyre, but the end of this sort of reminds me of a particular moment between Jane and Edward Rochester.