Huh? Oh, where was I? That was cute! Yeah! And I liked Vinnie too! Or was it Vivi? What? Where am I? Shazam!

So you've put an end to the series, eh? Well, from what I've read so far I liked Camille, Viki, Blackman, Jeane, Kirke, Eikei, Sydonia, Morgan, Fu Su Lu, Georges, Tesla, Stallion, and Gon. The rest were pretty good but what I've listed were the best ones. Can't wait for the Suikoden II version.

Oh no! Done... such an ominous word. Well I guess I can read Untitled. I liked the Rokkaku proverb. Ninja smart, no? Anyway, about the Suikoden II version of 15 minutes, could you feature Tengaar? She's not a main character, and she's a readhead! I'm a readhead too and I'm also babbling so I'll check later for your next "15 Minutes"

Beaban!

Ha ha! Like that last comment, I'm a NASCAR fan so I would know! I thank thee writting this fic as conorp has requested. I'm just a little bummed you chose a song where the hero dies. Oh well, atleast he didn't really die. Wait... He doesn't even exist... It's scary...

Lovely story. I like the "Gon" with the Wind thing. That was pretty funny. Thanks for posting the Stallion chapter. You should be getting a review from Carledo (He's the reason I suggested Stallion in the first place!) Keep writing, these are magnificent.

These stories are absolutely brilliant, as usual. I will suggest one story. Do one on Stallion. This only comes to mind due to a friend of my brothers who babbles about him constantly. Then, maybe someone will hear about his speed.

Beaban!

For someone who never spoke much, you really came up with a cool story about him. I think this idea is really clever. There are so many characters in the Suikoden series that just get breezed over and you never really learn much about them. You bring a depth to them that is really enjoyable and makes them come alive. Very well-written!

LOL! That was great! I always thought Viki was kind of an unusual character...you really brought life to her. I liked all the misunderstood names. Heh heh. This little story was really entertaining! Great job!

i love your stories!but i would really love it if you do one on little GREMIO!

Hmm... the first story has a few small problems...

The first being, the SME wasn't at war with the whole of Jowsten, just South Window.

Second, The Seven sun's weren't even in Jowsten, they were in Highland.

And thirdly, Highland is a Military kingdom, so I doubt seven soldiers, even seven of the BEST soldiers could infiltrate the Capitol of the kingdom without being noticed by anyone. I mean, what happened to the Border guards? There's a gigantic wall seperating Jowsten and Highland. The only way through with horses are check points.

Finaly... If Jowsten/Highland are at war with the SME, how did a Nobel from the Toran region even get to Highland?

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Those are just points I picked out of this one story, there may be more, but I might have missed them...

I'll now read the others and give you more things that don't add up...

I have followed this story for some time, and it is good. I mean it is really good. I like how it follows Suikoden 1 characters, but dabbles in Suikoden 2. I hope you continue this fantastic piece of work.

Beaban!

either you're obviously not a poet or you wrote it like this on purpose. well, i've read your Fifteen Minutes at last, so quit egging me about it! (one of the chapters, anyway) i think the last line is the funniest.

Fiiiinaaaalllyyy A VIKI story!

I just love you!(not THAT way of course)

Pretty good so far. Camille's story is nice and heart-warming, Viki's story is amusing, Jeane was somewhat mysterious, (I didn't realize she looked like HER!) and Kirke's story is just plain creepy. The worse one so far has got to be Lotte's because it was just too stupid and pointless. (Her cat wasn't even in it!) But at least it's the only bad tale in the bunch. :p

I thought Qlon was a boy. O_O *DIES* AAAAUGH it's scary. T_T Anyway, I loved the Viki story. And the Jeane one (..the ending... XD She does look like..). The Kirkis one was creepy... o_o