I LOVED this story! The darkness in it was really intriguing and very realistic. Your theories actually caused me to think if it could've happened like that. I have to say that the possibility of Kagome actually being the shikon no tama was really cool! Anyway I hope you write more stories because your writing style was really refreshing and there needs to be more stories like yours!3

This is a beautiful story! I actually read this years and years ago, but only now just found it again. It took me forever to find it, but I'm really glad I did because it's just a great as I remember it being! )

Really good story. I think it is not a great/amazing story since you sort of skipped the best part! That being, the two of them realizing their feelings for each other, etc. It slightly misses the mark that way for being a romance because of that (intentionally so?). Great action, cool theory on the jewel and the world and everything. And for what you showed of their budding relationship, almost the most if not the most in-character and believably SessKag, up there with Tales from The House of the Moon (which did correspond the action to the romance, thus getting an emotional double whammy from the climax of the story).

Anywho- great job!

this was a great story and i loved your writing stlye and how you brought the two characters together i hope to read more of you stories.

That story was beautiful, although I would have loved to see more Sess/Kag intimacy before it ended. YOu are a skilled writer and I really and truly hope you decide to write a sequel.

to no-hope-at-all, kagome has blue eyes in the manga smartass. -_-

anyway, great start

Oh My GOSH! I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!

i really liked your story. i actually cried at the end during kagome's letter to inuyasha because my fav pairing is the inu/kag pairing even though i also like sess/kag. other than that i thought your story was very good. :)

kagome has brown eyes not blue...

the story is pretty good so far...

Love it! You should write a sequel it would be awesome well Good story like I said before.

An absolutely wonderful story. I stayed up almost all night because I just couldn't stop reading it. As much as I love a good Sesshomaru/Kagome pairing, I just could never see that possibly happening, but you made it seem that way. Wow. This is the longest review I've ever typed! A wonderful job and I can't wait to read more of your work.

That was amazing. Simply amazing. There really is nothing more I can say. Thank you for such a well written story.

This story was amazing! I love it.

I know this story is complete, but I had to review it because I thought it was so good. I think the plot was very good, and I loved how the emotions were worked in thourghout the story.

I think this is my favorite Sesshoumaru. Like ever. D; You really did an amazing job with this story. Your characterizations, the bittersweetness throughout the story...it's just fantastic. Great job with this.