 FaerieKnight197 3/28/12 . chapter 8Quite amusing story here. I'm not really a fan of Venture Brothers, but this was an enjoyable read. |
 Rose1948 10/16/11 . chapter 8Well worth the sore ribs from laughing so hard! Thanks for sharing! |
 KillerWombat 7/16/11 . chapter 8I want more...please tell me this story is still alive. |
 Raynze76 4/18/11 . chapter 8interesting story that i look forward to reading any future chapters of which i hope will happen soon please keep up the good work |
 ijpowers92 3/29/11 . chapter 8this was incredibly original and totally awesome! I cannot wait for the next part. |
 dogbertcarroll 1/1/11 . chapter 8Sadly few villains or groups of villains can stand up to the NWC for long. Point them all in the same direction, preferably away from anything you want in one piece, and they can get through anything. |
 Adeptis 5/15/10 . chapter 8Good story. |
 WillItWork 5/8/10 . chapter 8Well, after Ozzallos linked thus, I've read all 8 Chapters posted so far. It's a great concept, I like how you put the different characters and positions together. Unfortunately, I don't know much about Venture Bros, which seems to be the base of this crossover.
My main complaint is in formattions and presentation—dropped characters, bad formatting, and other randomness makes this very hard to read. As a sugesstion: use more bold and italics, and have them mean things. Also, you don't have to put everything in quotes, just when you first introduce the word or phrase.
But still, good pulpy fun. Thank you for sharing. |
 god of stuff 5/3/10 . chapter 8Rather entertaining story. Only real complaints I can file is that it seems to miss some of the feeling if venture brothers. While the characters seemed a bit deranged, they weren't comedic deranged in the same way as the VB. Also the idea of the entire NWC as a single force would seem like it would be more than a little overpowering compared to any other guild sanctioned antagonists. Also I would suggest maybe something in the stuff taken from Orpheus have a way from Ranma to lock/unlock the curse at will. It just wouldn't do to accidentally change back to a much larger guy from a form fitting female costume now would it? |
 Rydan fall 5/3/10 . chapter 8Hope you wil write more of this, would like to see/read more about Ranko/Jade-Dragon.
Any curse lockers to pick up in the near future? |
 FluffyNevyn 4/29/10 . chapter 8Got my vote. I like. I also think this is an Excellent start to what could be quite the epic saga. Please continue D |
 Nysk 4/10/10 . chapter 8I look forward to the next arc |
 Jokulmorder 4/6/10 . chapter 8Chapter 8 is kind of short, I can see it's an intermission, but there's always a way to flesh things out further. |
 Jokulmorder 4/6/10 . chapter 7Developing nicely, just keep the audience on their toes, by whatever means. |
 James Axelrad 4/6/10 . chapter 8this is a fun little fic you have. hope there will be more at some point. |