Wow. That was great poetry. I liked the imagery it created and the emotions it portrayed. And the last line really drove the point home. Awesome job!

ouch! so good, it hurts.

Hi! Pense already not volverías to write anymore, because it makes long didn't know nothing tí. I wonder if volveras to resume your evil place 3 story. It is excellent and I would love to know that ends. Please don't let get it abandoned more time, not be fair to those who we follow this closely some of your extraordinary work. atte: your friend Haoyoh Asakura. PD. If you have the full story on another page, please tell me where. my email is or leave a message on my fic..."EL verdadero enemigo" in spanish. thank you.

Wow, this is amazing. Usually I don't even read something if it's poetry, but for some reason this one caught my eye. I'm so glad I read it! I love the story you've created and how you tied it into Same As It Never Was. The style of the writing fit perfectly with the story. This was truly great. Good job!

I love it!

I love the format and the flow. Your voice is very strong in this; it helps you make this harsh situation into a work of art. Great job!

Very nice i really liked this!

-Lon

Wow! This is awesome written! You so got talent!

What you've written here show that we don't need many words or long stories to touch someones heart

Moa

Interesting poem. -

Just one word: Lovely.