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| Reviews for Darkness Within |
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   blake015 11/21/11 . chapter 2great |
| Xj9 10/3/11 . chapter 30 Aaahh, Videl and Gohan needed that moment! So cute. And who is that figure! I wanna know! Please update sooooon! |
| Sapphira23 9/14/11 . chapter 1 Really good! I like it a lot! Glad you told us! |
| animelover 9/13/11 . chapter 30 AWWWWW, AHHHH, AHHH GOHAN NOO GOHAN AHHHHH WHO ATTACKED YOU? AHHHH IT RUINED THE PERFECT MOMENT AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH CAN'T WAIT FOR MOREEE LAJSBDIUFAIEWF ! |
| Mandalore18 9/10/11 . chapter 30 Thanks for the Update. Ti's been awhile. Update when you can. |
| dragonballz's 7/25/11 . chapter 29 hurry up and right the neww chapterr this is awesomee! :D |
| Masterofthebluedragon 6/30/11 . chapter 25 yaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!I like this chapter! Its so nice when Piccolo says to Gohan "beause of our bond" and when Krillin is all teasing Gohan about Videl. Yaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy! Nice . I already put this chapter in my favorites of my computer so i can read again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and you know what you know what I am saying. yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! |
| Guest 6/5/11 . chapter 9 I have been following your updates on fanfiction for over a month or two. I follow that story like a lost puppy. It is so addicting. I literally try to think what's going to happen next but you never know what another mind might be thinking. So then I am rendered clueless and have to wait. Love how it's coming it's better than anything I would have ever thought in my life. You are so creative. Never stop you are way too good. Please please update soon! |
| animelover 5/27/11 . chapter 29 AWWW! SOOOOOOOOO CUTTEEE! EHHHH! But ahh! that means there must be something bad on the way 0.o oh well, we all like something bad to happen to our heros! EHHHHH CAN'T WAIITTT! |
| Xj9 5/20/11 . chapter 29 Great chapter! Videl and Gohan are falling in love with each other! So cute :) And what about that weird dream? I can't wait to find out! Update soon! |
| The0Blind0Writer 5/16/11 . chapter 29 lol, loved it! great update, glad to get some everyday life in there. update soon! |
| Dr. Blue22 5/16/11 . chapter 29 Really great update, story is doing good hopefully the bond between gohan and videl will develop soon and that could help him with his problems maybe? Update soon! |
| Mandalore18 5/16/11 . chapter 29 The stones are falling into place. The next step needs too take place at the dance. Update soon. |
| Zi-Dawg 5/16/11 . chapter 1 Chapter 29 won't load on the computer for me, so I'll review what I remember from my reading on my phone. Plenty of G/V fluff, can never be a bad thing. I think it might be a bit rushed though the feelings they're having. Love is a big thing, I know you have them around each other basically 24/7, but...eh, my opinion, I still like it none-the-less. Of course, Erasa would sign them up for a class she's controlling, how typical lol. Sharpner needs to get over it, he's not meant to be with Videl |
| alex 5/16/11 . chapter 28 why wont chapter 29 load? |
