hi...your story is so sweet, very touching, and well written...ja ne

That was nice. Do you know what? I could feel water in my eyes, which is saying alot since I don't/can't cry anymore. It was so sweet. Total poetic justice. I encourage more of these .

...Wow...I've only read just the beginning of this thing and already I'm breathless!...Man, you're a good author! Keep up with your writing. I know that comments on people's work always helps them continue and get better!

Good lord, why doesn't this have more reviews? A true gem of a fic - Shuu's anguish mixed with that humerous little bit at the end - every big bro's horror about their little sister's and boys, neh? Poor gal. Excellent, excellent job!

;_;... just ';_;'. And you say this is your first shot at Trooper-angst? ::dies:: Very, very well-written. I'd applaud, but I'm too busy with the kleenex box over here.

Okay now I'm bawling! This was so well written and the emotions really tugged at my heart. This story really touched me since I went through a scare this past summer when they thought my own little girl had bone cancer after they found a tumor on her femur bone. Thank you for writing this, it made me see even more how lucky I am and just how brave those kids I met, really are. Keep up the great work, you have a lot of talent.

You already know what I think of this story, but it bears repeating: well done, Lily. The emotion portrayal was good, the banter (little though there was, seeing as Ki-lin didn't have the strength to really keep up a long conversation with Shu(u)) was realistic, and you know what you're talking about (it can really kill a story if the author has no to very little idea about the subject matter). *clapping* I like it.