that, is one of the most depressing fics i have ever read...wow. please write more lotr fics!

AU, right? How sad... they didn't go to the Undying Lands of Valinor, then, huh? Well, short but sweet in its own simplicity. Nice. Michelle

awwwww! poor lil leggie! poor poor legolas! *sniffs*

Aw. That was so sad, but very good! I couldn't find any grammer mistakes! Great job!

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i know not what to say, apart from does anyone have a tissue? i mean that was so sad, i almost cried (and that doesn't happen very often) is he really dead?

Very moving :( So sad :(

awww, that's so sweet! *sniffle* That really is quite sad. It's a really good story, well done.

nice and simple.

*Sobs* Oh my god! So sad! That's really good! But, do you think next time you put this sort of stuff up on the site, you could include a free downloadable file of a virtual box of tissues? I love it! Keep going!

Very good. You need a little work on wording, though.