I came across your work and this story via the unparalleled Northumbrian and I must say this story ranks up their with his! Great job!

Wow, it is almost like the gift of the magi.

Awww it's so heartwarmingly cute when Harry tells Mrs Weasley how much much it means to him to be treated as part of her family and feel loved... No wonder she stopped telling him off! It was such a lovely moment for both of them and it really made me smile.

Love this story

cute fluffyness

good twist to an old story line that I've always loved anyway.

Thanks for writing it.

Such a cute story! loved it! xx

Hello,

Just read your story loved it and the way the two left notes and finally the ending was wonderful.

It is a story that could be cont. if you wanted the job that they could do together.

Good luck in all you do, and thanks for the ride.

It's such a heartwarming story. Another great for writing.

Interesting idea. Overall, I liked the story. It was well written, no typos, etc. I figured out the presents before they gave them, like halfway thru ch 4, so good job on hiding it that long. I also liked the concern the rest of the family showed for H/G.

The only suggestion I'd make would be to change the length of time for their "troubles" from 5 years to something like 1-2 years. I have trouble believing the 5, and 1-2 gets the point across and still sounds believable, and still allows your story to work.

Kevin

Loved this story! The letters that Harry & Ginny left each other were funny, loving, and steamy at the same time...and it's obvious to me that's one of the main reasons they were able to stay so connected even when they were apart. I especially liked the ending to Chap. 3-it had me giggling out loud! :) Very well done, and thanks for writing!

Very nice. I was slightly worried at the beginning...it was despressing that they were always missing one another, but it ends on a happy note - so all is well.

I enjoyed this enough that I raced through it without stopping to review every chapter - sorry :)

I very much enjoyed their notes to one another :)

This was a really good story. the end was very sweet. i liked all the letters they exchanged in the previous chapters

That was a really good ending. And I was totally wrong in my guess. Silly me, I thought he bought her the team so she could control the practices/meetings.

And again, I loved what you did with Ron in this story.

Rachelme

Well, that was certainly a nice way to spend the evening.

I love that Harry has got everyone calling Victorie Vicky. That's a great bit, and it was fun to see it go from idea to execution to success.

I like the ferret lights, too.

Rachelme

That was good - it would have been great, except I didn't notice this was a chapter story, so I was a bit miffed when I thought it was going to end like that. Oops.

I loved the Molly-hug moment. I just love when she gets all motherly on the poor boy. And Hermione's little comment about Harry having to work for Ginny was great.

Rachelme