great chapter! please update soooon! :)

I like where you are taking Frankies character. The fact that he has more sympathy makes me like him more. In the movie I hope for a whole lot more with his character. I also want more Ali/Frankie scenes, but this makes up for it, at least a little. Please continue, can't wait to read the next chapter.

lol update soon plz XD its coolies as

Great story so far! please continue! :D

Aww poor Jen... If I can rate your story it'll be 5/5 D

First off: HAPPY BIRTHDAY! It sucks that you're stuck in school :(

Second off: I love Frankie! And Jen seems like she's really cool. I hope Frankie is able to help her in some way, and I can tell she's going to help him too.

She's a different kind of vampire, eh? Definitely gives me something to ponder as I await another chapter... :) I loved it!

This is getting really up the good work and update soon!

I am very intrigued! Frankie had this mysterious quality to him since they never really explained anything from his past, so I'm interested in seeing how you're going to portray him. Your OC is also very mesmerizing, I can't wait to see what happens!

I like what you got so far. I hope there is more coming soon.

who is the stopry about? i didnt get the girls name. write some more it was good.

This sounds very interesting so far. Keep up the good work!

Hm... What is going on here? I've enjoyed the start and cannot wait to read more! :)