This is nice very intresting please write more soon
from Kimmers

love this and cna't wait for more please write more soon

from Kimmers

3 chapters was all it took to break my heart. nah, it stopped beating with the first one actually. it's a good story. really good.

The first two chapters brought tears to my eyes they were so well written. Then there's chapter 3 and it's more like an episode summary. The personal touch - that you obviously can write - seemed missing. I'll be back because I would like to see that you do with the story.

Hey just read the rest. I liked it! Keep writing. )

definately continue.

This is a really cute and nice story... But there's only one thing wrong with it, well not WRONG.. but not exactly right either. I don't think that Angel would write diary entries so long and detailed... You know how long that would take? Like 3 hours... Just telling ya that! _ Otherwise, I love your fic!

I really liked the first two chapters, but I think you lost the narrative voice a little in this third one. Too much realiance on stright forward summary of events from the diary. You should include more of Angel's reactions than a summary of shows we've seen. I'd like to see this continue.

omg you have to finish this ,it is excellent that is the truth can't wiat for the next chapters.

Good story! ) hope theres more coming soon

This is soooooooooooooo sad! Yet, it is very, very good! You've left me aching for more!

aaaawwwwww...sniffleness... :)

that is so sweet, i cant stop crying "sniffle" u have to write more soon. """ill be waiting""" *g*

imortal_destiny

Oh, we have to have more! I love it! More, more more, please! The diary idea is just perfect!

Oh...*Zozzy sniffs* is really liked this. The idea that Angel made a sacfifice and now Cordelia gets to read what he really felt. Oh i can't wait for more and will read...when i stop crying.

Nutty (Zozzy)