A nice idea though I don't like the fact you made Slytherin's pretty much "bad guys" even though Scorpious wasn't- why is he an "expection"? Can't he see that not all Slytherins are bad?

I'm surprised he was allowed to be Head Boy, with McGonagall for Headmistress. And it's a pity that he thinks he can't possibly be good and a Slytherin at the same time.

No doubt that's why McGonagall is confused there at the end; I expect she has trouble with the same thing.

Nicely done.

That is a wonderful story! I absolutely love it! It's joining my favorites!

Very bittersweet, I liked it.

This is a very nice character study of Scorpio. I've always been a fan of Draco because I think that he has overcome a lot, but I like that it is the next gen that will really be their own people. A lovely concept and a lovelier piece.

Aww, this is cute! I love it!

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It was very well written! I liked it, it showed an almost softer side of Draco.

You're truly an amazing writer, the only suggestion I have is for you to somehow break up the scene changes in a more obvious way, such as putting a hyphen in. Or maybe that's how the story was supposed to be, anyways, I loved it.

The characterization of Scorpius was great and it's nice that you wrote about him overcoming Draco's reputation.

Reallyreally fantastic work.

Pyro

Excellent story.

Thank you for taking part in my challenge! This was a really lovely fic! Very heartfelt and superbly written :)

This is a good story!