This was one of my favourites! I hope you start writing it again! :))

XD You write these characters so well! I really hope you ad some more of this. XD

LOL YES. OCD Naru is too perfect. Lol you got all of it - the astonishment from Mai (and the rest of us) at the fact he shaves - his inability to express himself - his stunted romance. Haha ... ahh ... very good.

Hahaha! These were wonderful! You have a very engaging writing technique. I enjoy the humor.

Oh...they're so cute! XD You captured their voices well, and the characterization was good as well, and the settings and details careful and considerate...but who really cares about that when there's such an adorable, tender moment between those two? So, so, so cute!

Cheers,

Lily

I was aw-ing at the whole thing xD Update soon!

cute stories

That is scarily true how similar Mai and Madoka are.

Naru must really be afraid for his life, especially if he plans to be with Mai for a long time. haha

Very cute; I loved it :D

Please update again soon :)

Kitsune-chan *_*

hahahaha! Well, that surely isn't a surprise. I always pictured Naru as a beast when it came to the bedroom - he just seems so much like the 'very healthy libido' and domninant type.

Loved it ;) Though Mai's little discovery was a bit...TMI. haha

Kitsune-chan *_*

Ha, Naru you dog! Course he's prepared. haha

Absolutely love it.

How cute that they moved in together! Shameful that Naru just LEFT though. haha

I just started this story and I really enjoyed it. the fact that Mai is an aweful lot like Madoka has crossed my mind too!

cute:)

aw they moved in with each other! :D good job!

wonderful and delightful little stories. they reminded me of how much I love this fandom; it's been a while since I revisited it. lovely work!