Oh it's so cute ! Great job, nice ending !

haha, so in my back-track of stories I hadn't gotten around to reviewing, there's anjother of yours!

His angst and self-loathing in this is amazing, it fleshes Peter out so much more and shows us how human he is :D If you can't tell, he's my favourite character ;) haha

I love that you chose him to slip up with the word 'dad' and that's what gave away something was wrong. Very poignant and well-written!

Interesting take on the conflicting emotions Peter went through while he was still infected. It would have been nice to see him focus on the fact he chose to walk away and not shoot her though.

That said, I enjoyed this fic. I had hoped for an apology that was more like this one on the show, but they're not as shippy on the show as us lol

Nice fic

Great piece! I really enjoyed seeing this quiet moment.

fyi, Peter switches his q-tip with one he picks up out of the tray where the q-tips of the uninfected are placed. If you watch Peter closely while Olivia is being tested, you can see him do it!

Well done!:)

very cute !

loved it ! :)

love it! omg last nights epi was intence, this was the perfect continuation! love it! :):)