that is so sad, it matches my mood. it was exactly what i needed. the world tuned there baks on her, and she was found on her loved ones grave. i really cried. beautiful.

aww...poor Cho...so sad...

This is a great little story, if not sad. Is the girl Cho, cause I got the impression it was.

Um, a little confused at the end though. Did she die, or was she just crying at the grave?

Oh my- wonderful. So sad. Was it Cho? I'm guessing it was. Did she die? Oh, so sad, but good.

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*Crying unconrollably* It *sob* was soo *cry* beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing, and thank you for reviewing my fics!

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*teary eyed* that IS really good! I luv it!

I did not expect that to be Cho. :( A very bittersweet, short story. I like it. :) Thanks for reviewing my story, I appreciate it so much! It's my first actual fanfic and I'm very proud of it! If you would like pointers e-mail me and I'll try to help!

ohhh how sad!

Nice story! Your summary mentioning a "break-up" really sets the reader thinking one way, so the ending is a surprise. And I like how the intensity gradually builds as you figure out that the girl is Cho. Very well written. The language is very intense in the last two paragraphs, you might want to tone that down just a tiny bit...but, I know, it's a very hard balance to find, and still keep the story moving. On the whole, I think you had a great idea and carried it out very well!

Very nice but a little mushy for my taste