This was a really good story. All the character's thoughts and actions were in character and really fleshed out. What Donnie was experiencing was really interesting too. But I really liked how you concluded your story. The denoument happened naturally and all the parts of the story were tied up well. Good job!

What a beautiful story. You have made this 37yr old guy cry over the pain of brothers in loss. I have the soggy tissues to prove it. Your writing style and choice of topic had me riveted to the computer well into the night. Well done.

I loved the way you left little clues in Donny's dream states to know that all was not quite right. Not forgetting the blurring of reality/dream state keeping me unsure of what was really real.

Thank you for a brilliant read.

Great chapter!

Ahh finally finished!

I tried to finish last night, I really did. You have no idea how out of it I was this morning haha.

But it was so worth it, this story is sooo incredible :)

Is Donetello you favorite? I'm just asking because from the 2 stories of yours I've read Donnie was the only common denominator of turtles/people injured, and from experience it's usually the favorites that end up getting hurt the most ;)

Anywho, there's really not much more to say about this story other than how AWESOME it is. The nightmares were so realistic, and everytime you wrote a dream without saying it was a dream... gah, I swear my heart dropped two stories both times Raph and Mike "died".

Fantastic job! I can't wait to read more! IYD24 :)

Awwww ;)

I LOVED the Kari bit by the way, Mythbusters are the bomb haha.

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...Holy Jesus O.O

(Sorry, I'm in a bit of a review mood, hope you don't mind haha)

I just wanted to say right now that I thought it was super awesome how even though Donnie was injured with... something... he still proved himself and took down a whole mess of Foot BY HIMSELF.

That was so cool :)

Haha alright, I'm gonna keep readin' now. IYD24.

Great job on the story I liked it alot, keep up the good work, and keep on writing.

I loved this fic! Definitely well written, and with a well thought out plot. C: You had me at the edge of my seat at times, others with tears in my eyes. It was definitely a roller coaster of emotion! You had me convinced that they'd all die in the end, but I'm glad for the happy ending.

I'll definitely be taking a look at your other stuff. C:

An absolutely fantastic read. Thank you so much for a pleasureable few hours.

I really like this so far. :)

Nice- really, really nice. 3

Still I think they should finally learn how to take care of themselves. P

No, Leo. PLEASE. This is not your fault.

I have an advice: Usagi. I know, I am too much of a fan to stay quiet here- call Usagi, he's a medic, he can help you.

Uh, yes, should I be worried about April 'n' Case? o0

So why doesn't Don go ahead after that talk and teach the others a little about medics and stuff? I mean, come ON! Of course the other team will always kill the white mage first, but hey, the others can at least carry potions and bandages with them just in case, right? ò.ó

"Great Living Room Ice Cream Disaster of ’09" LoL. That was classic. Great ending! I never expected the turtles to manipulate Karai into doing *exactly* what they wanted. Nicely done. The humor that came afterwards was a great way to dispell all of the mad intensity of the rest of the fic. It was heartwarming. To be honest it's nice to see a fic with such variability in tone - from dark and horrific to outrageously hilarious. All in all, a wonderfully written fic! I’m glad I stumbled upon this little jem hiding away in . _ That’s all for my comments. Toodles!