Interesting, but you should have labeled it as AU or something...it's a lot darker and unsettling than the summary suggests.

ahn poor Kenken dearest! *hugs Ken comfortingly* how could Aya do that to you? *glares at the redhead*

Ran: *sighs and beckons to Ken* come here...

Ken: *sniffles and turns to Ran* Aya...

Ran: *hugs the brunette close and strokes the soft brown hair* I'm sorry...

*sniff* well i wished that was the ending lol.. damn you brought so many emotions out of me in this fic... so deep, so.. poor Ken... *sighs*

aw...happy(ish) ending for Kenken. I loved your writing. Poor Ken was all depressed ;.;. You put it across really well.

Oh, goddess give me strength! I must resist reading this over and over again! I love it so much! Excuse me whilst I rant and hyper ventilate over the brilliance. And an odd pairing, as well! Rock on, girl (who is very much older than me... _0)!

I'll be honest, the 7th chapter made me cry. It's incredibly moving and dramatic and very angsty... I think you did a good job, although it was so very depressing.

I like the end bit. Heh.

is that it...?i swear thst there was going to be more..? but if not DAMN!_

Oh. Good ending. *giggles at the Blair Witch reference* Overall, this was one kickass story!

That was unexpected. Ooh. Now what happens? I'm loving this sooo much!

Mm...Ken hit a string in Aya. Well, good for him! The mystery man is "Daddy Dearest" isn't it? Ohhh... evil evil.

No...Ken! Wow. I really love this story. It's going on my favorites. It's really deep. And poor Ken...

Ehe, I'm judt going to start reviewing here. This story is awesome. o.o It's very emotional. You gotta love the Ken angst. It's a very powerful story so far.

-Akiko, The Girl Dressed As Aya at C-Kon in the Karaoke Room! AHAH! .

oh wai

i really like it ! it's good... angsty, different and such

me wanna write like that too... and i end up writing... rubbish *looks* erm... hehe would wuv to know u

Ken left Weiss...Ken left Omi...Ken left Youji an Ran...That was the part I didn't like...

not bad but is it based on a true story...

ummm. I really don't know what to think of this story's ending. I really don't. It is too abrupt and doesn't really explain what happens between Ken and Aya. Or why Ken just leaves. I like this sotry, but it is sort of unresolved. Are you going to write more, or is that the end?