you should put what soul society's reactions would be especially matsumoto and unohana. lol

that was so whats the word KAWAII Toshiro was just to KAWAII

nice nice nice!

Pleeeeeeaaaase update I'm in LUV with this story!

Umm, with the age thing, if you had him age a lot but had a good explanation why, would that be really bad?

Interesting story.

A disagreement:

While Toshiro may have the mental equivalent of a 12yr old, you are forgetting his environment and exposure. He doesn't have to understand sex but he can be desensitized to it. This happenes everyday as children watch R-rated movies and shows. In his at least 100 years of life (assuming the age ratio is 10:), and with 11th as his neighbors, it stands to reason he would have heard or seen a few explicit things (not to mention stories from spirits he would have encountered from wars like WWII).

Also, in Ch.7 you write that you can't understand why so many people have Toshiro in mature relationships at his young age. Well that probably has to do with Japanese laws. The Age of Consent in Japan is 13 (used to be 12). In the case of Sana, if Toshiro was 13, no legal action would be taken unless he pressed charges for assault/molestation. In the case of a pairing like Toshiro/Ichigo, if Japan has "Romeo and Juliet" laws like the U.S. does, Ichigo would be protected. As long as Toshiro is 13 in a fanfic, and it takes place in Japan, everyone is free game from Karin to Aizen(blegh).

True so True,buuuut if you really wanted to get into his character,you could have gotten him to cry in front of ichiigo only_ Otherwise GREAT story!

Please either right more of this or put up "High School Boy"

Is it the end? :D

sana is a slut

kill the slut!

ew...kick sana's butt!

I will admit that I usualy dont read oc Fics beacuse I have necountered too many Mary sue's To be comfortable with it.

I'm very glad thath you pointed out some things in this fic which a very true. I adore Toshiro but to set him up with an Oc that is not his age and acts as a slut? I'm very glad that you have written this.

very good. And it is good to do both sides of the issue.

Good lord, Toshiro was so clingy in this chapter.

I think I felt my heart break. MENTAL TRAUMA!

Good story over all!