Cool you did it for Australia day, but the humor is lacking in many chapters, and so are the torture techniques... Is this one of your first stories or something? If it is, I can tell... I'll finish this story, because I believe it can get better. I don't want to but I'll do it because I'll do it for you guys! (That is a name of an FMA chapter in the 5th volume of the manga... yes I am that much of a nerd...) I just am NOT seeing the humor in this story that well...

I LOVE KITTIES! But you didn't really explain what happened to Lucario in the alley, all you said was he started singing and then got slashed? That wasn't a great chapter again, but the one part I found funny was when Midna said: "DIIIIEEE!" Only because it reminded me of Gannon in the Zelda CD-i games! XP (No offence, but this definitely isn't your best story, and I can so tell it is Australian humor...)

Not the best chapter so far, but not the worst either... but why do you make Link like a stupid boyfriend type of guy? And why do you make him like Zelda? He belongs with Midna and everybody knows it! XP

My favorite part was the parody of Poker Face, Poke-her Face! XD hehehehehehehehehehehehehehe MUCH better than your last two chapters, but that is all I am reviewing for today! XD

Again, not as good as your first chapter, and probably worse than your second chapter too, but I'll keep reading because I believe in you (and the smashers!)! XD

Well this chapter wasn't as good as the last, but why would you make Peach vomit on Shigeru Miyamoto? He is a god! (Just like Hiromu Arakawa and Truth...) I would've KILLED that bitch! Also when the crowd is singing: "RA, RA, RA RA, RA! ROMA ROMA, MA, MA!" are they singing lady gaga or something? I don't hate lady gaga, but I don't like her either... just curious. It was still funny, but not as funny as the first chapter. ;)

Nice! You should do more stories like this! XD I cracked up at the "KILL THE PLUMBER part! XDXDXD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I say less description is better than more, so I really like this! XD FAVORITED! I know I haven't read it all yet, but I hope you also put some Fullmetal Alchemist characters in here, that sounds hilarious! XD I think that it is kind of vain to have yourself in your own story, but that is just me! XD

I WOULD LOVE TO BE FRIENDS WITH YOU! XD

Your subscriber,

Nayru the automail girl

(Death to Winry! YAAAHH!)

Awesome story... The second season is even better though :) But there'sone problem:I think you missed Marth's torture... How sad, i would habve liked to see him tortured!

Ah, and so the saga concludes...for now. Yay, you are gonna do a season two! And it sounds like it'll be better than ever!

Glad to help. I hope I wasn't too hard on you. If so, I am sorry.

We'll see you again next time. I'll be sure to leave some torture at least once XD!

Wait, there's gonna be a new seoson?YAY!And sorry I didn't review the chapter before this one, I didn't get to this quick nice job in these last to chappies!Thanks for putting me in, to!And for making me chase Ike and Yoshi around for autograghs!And good job having everyone get tortured one last to funny.I only have one complaint though, and thats that I never got Yoshis autograph in the chapter with 4 people being oh well...I got Ike's cape and that makes up for it!So yeah...Nice job on this, and I can't wait for the next season!

Awesome and funny ending! I like how you got Onie and Gagdet together. I hope to see your next story very soon because that was...GANGSTA!

Your bud and fellow writer,

OnyxSarune18

WOOHOO! There wil be a season 2 YES! I'm guessing you were scared at me going to cut you with a hammer? HAHA, well epic story iz epic, looking forward to SSBG2

don't end this! Not yet! oh well, I suppose you will make a sequel, or I will come to your house, and I will cut you, I will cut you, with my hammer, and hammers don't normailly cut so imagine how much of a long and painful process this will be

Aw, it's almost over? I'd sniffle, but...reality...not to sound cold, but I have to keep some semblance of dignity.

It's actually about time Midna got drunk. She's had it coming.

So, all that's left is Luigi, right? We'll see if he wins or not.

Hehehe, those Final Fantasy guys are some big chickens. Keep the great work with the story.