I love reading a story that I can really get into. This, this magnificent fanfiction, I really got into. My kindle was on the brink of running out of battery and I started speed reading. I absolutely loved the romance you brought to the story and how you basically reversed the real story line. It was wonderful. Period. :D

i like this story so far and hop you update soon

great chapter

Update soon :)

I like this story very much ;)

Very interesting...

I love it! Very well written, very in character

It makes me blush everytime George calls her lass. He's perfect for her.. cant believe she didnt see that til later.

love it :) are you going to continue it?

loved it! :). really good. please continue.

this is really awsome!

loved it :)

Argh! I gotta know what happens next! It's still too early in the story to say whether I like it or not but I'm definitely intrigued and wish to know how this will play out. Even though it says Alanna/Jonathon, I'm still not sure if Alanna and Jon will end up together. Please please update soon! I think I like this story but seems like it's barely gotten started so I don't know!

while i like the first chapter better, this is really good :D

Wow. The emotion in this chapter was incredible. Please update soon!

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loved it

this is good! i like it (minus a few grammatical points, but the grammar is good most the most part) and I like how Alanna runs to GEorge :D