It was good! In this last chapter you could have included a little more romance between Ittosai and May...but it's pretty good as it is...good luck with your other writing and if you have some extra time check out my story on ...here's the link : s/3050465/1/Between_worlds
I would be eternally grateful if you read it and tell me what you think about it (through a review). Cheers!

hmm...it was actually a good ending...him being a real boy and all :) And it sounded genuine

:)) You're in the story...that's interesting:)

I hope Ittosai's declarations will be original...I mean since I played the game and all...I wan to be surprised...

Keep up the good work!

yay!Ittosai the hero:))

Poor Bo! :))) I liked him best of the game though I must admit his ending was not so romantic as I would have expected. I likes Yo's ending ebst because itw as soo sweet!And to think that initially I never even considered Yo an option...it would be great if you do a fanfic on Yo too, you have talent

yay...can't wait to see what happens

Hilarious chapter:)))) laughed loads...

the hot spring scene was soo cute. Also, I never believed Bo was a pervert..in the game I was sure he chimed in with the rest of the guys because of the fun, I might reconsider...Bo might actually be a pervert

It ws a pretty good chapter! waiting for the romance...I think Sayori falls for Jin right?

Going great! like the story soo much so far!

I like it! I do hope she chooses Yo though I understand you have a crush for Ittosai..damn! Love Yo!

i like the fanfic very much!

I'm guessing that ittosai was just watching at the sidelines in this chapter without a care of what might happen to may..except to maybe find an opportunity to shed blood.