i like the story even though you told me that bastian wouldnt be in it... anyways love the story... thank you... :D

Okay, I'm breaking my promise to myself to read everything in order from oldest to newest, but ah well. This is a one-shot, so we're all good :P

Well, first off, tell meguin the penguin I say happy birthday :D Well, I could always do that myself, but...

I actually liked the first sentence. I could imagine her spinning and walking in the wedding dress like it was a dance. And I also really liked how you incorporated flashbacks. Hmm...I could have sworn I said that in a review before...but I like the flashback effect. But I especially liked the Lucia/Soren one. It was really sweet.

And that was really sad for everyone: Lucia and Soren, Elincia and Ike (though I really don't care too much about him xP He just...irks me...), and Ranulf and Mia. But I think the "implied death" at the end really worked and fit the mood. :D Awesomeness

:( you killed them in a pretty sad way when you said you wouldn't even if you only implied it jeez penguin's gonna be angry at you but well since the genre here is drama I guess that works out.