Heya Mika here, sorry for the majorly uber late review I haven't been on fanfiction once in the last month because I have been incredibly busy and even then I have so many chapters to get through, I am trying to get through them in the order I recieve them and I have 49 chapters to read and review after this one.

This was a really good chapter, well, no wonder Ryoko hates Kai. Her father is constantly putting her down and reminding her of how Kai is so much better than him. I feel sorry for her.

It's good that she is getting over some of her hatred for him as he helps her, especially since it's not his fault. Hehehe, I wonder what Tala, Bryan and Kai are dressing up as, this should be good...and funny! Well if Kai and Bryan are going, I just assumed, I hope they are and can't wait to see what they dress up as if they go.

Oh my gosh, I wonder who that guy is and what has happened to Kai! I hope that he is okay, and that Ryoko doesn't get hurt.

I cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the amazing work and please update soon. Sorry again for the late review. XXMikaXX

You have me very interested. Please update soon, I really want to find out what's going to happen!

omg i love it! well thought out and engaging. plus it isnt one of those 'omg! im kais friend from russia that he hasnt seen for ten years!' or 'im talas little sister, oops im in love with kai!' please write more soon. x

Love the story so far!

Write more soon!

-Michy

this sounds good! i hope you update soon :)

seems like an interesting story. updatte soon

Heya Mika here, this is a really good fic and I can see alot of potential in it. There are no spelling or gramatical mistakes that I can see so well done!

Like I said, this is a really good fic and I liked your OC. Keep up the great work and please update soon. XXMikaXX