wow, I loved this. 3 Vince/Merton is love! Great fic.

I'm not sure if your even still around, but I need to tell you this story was awesome! Are you interested in co-oping on a fic?

I knew there would've been more if Vince had stayed!

that was hot. You should see some of my work on fictionpress. Ja ne

A little creepy that Merton has grown feelings for his imaginary friend whom has the mind of an 8 year old but original none the less.

you HAVE to make more chapters. and write more merton/vince!

good story. i love it. i love anything that mention David Bowie, but i would sill love this story if it didnt menyoin him

Sexeh without being filth, very good work!

I like how you had the childishness of Vince, as if the whole thing was a game. Very cute fic! :)

How cool is that, Merton/Vince slash! I just love it. Really. And you write very well, too. I loved the whole thing. Are you thinking about other chapters? I'd love that, but anyway, this was an awesome slash fanfiction. Keep up the gresat work!

Love,

Karine

Alright Merton/Vince Slash! (I'm seeing more and more of those, much to my delight) Although the two hottest BWOC dudes goin' at it wierded me out at first, I believe that they belong together. (If of course Merton chose to become a homosexual) I mean, I drool all over them, but um... okay shuttin' up... I think I'll write a Marton/Vince fic...

DOOOOOOOOOOOOOD this is really good! It's really well written (hideously so!) and Vince iz soooo kyoooot! It had that whole maturity thing and such deep undertones, the shtuff real literature is made out of... or sumthin _ good stuff! write more!

yay! something original!

though... I usually go for more graphic and emotional stuff. but still. yay for the new pairings!

*claps and whistles* WHOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You RULE! :D That fic was spicy, sweet, and funny! Two thumbs way way up!

...OK, this was written really well, you write really well. It was just weired though, he's a figment! For all rights and purposes Merton was making out with his brain... Now that I think about it, I'm really amused. It was funny and it was cute...a little odd though:P

pretty good. I'm not usually into Slash, but this was good. I loved the "so what you really mean is that it was friend #3, in the billiard room, with the Bowie album?" line.